Rate my team for platinum.

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THis team is strictly paper, havent tested yet. Also this is my first team to compose. I'm just trying to get some advice on any changes that i should probably make, yada, yada, yada.

Pokemon: Scizor
Item: Life Orb / Leftovers
Trait: Technician
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Nature: Adamant
Moves:
-Sword Dance
-Bullet Punch
-Brick Break
-Bug Bite

Pokemon: Kingdra
Item: Life Orb
Trait: Swift Swim
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Nature: Modest
Moves:
-Rain Dance
-Surf
-Dragon Pulse
-Signal Beam

Pokemon: Skarmory
Item: Leftovers / Shed Shell
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
Nature: Impish
Moves:
-Spikes
-Whirlwind
-Roost
-Steel Wing

Pokemon: Blissey
Item: Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
Nature: Bold
Moves:
-Wish
-Softboiled
-Siesmic Toss
-Toxic

Pokemon: Tentacruel
Item: Leftovers
Trait: Liquid Ooze
EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpD
Nature: Calm
Moves:
-Toxic Spikes
-Rapid Spin
-Surf
-Sludge Bomb

Pokemon: Gliscor
Item: Leftovers
Trait: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Nature: Jolly
Moves:
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Roost
-Taunt
 
i'd love to rate it but i didn't even bother reading it.
it has no descriptions or anything, plus you didn't even test it.

edit: i'll say something. is scizor your lead? you should get a dedicated lead. idk if you've played gen 5, but there's no team preview here so you might as well lead with gliscor since he's already there.
 
Read the rules. You need to test the team and give detailed descriptions of what each pokemon does for you. Fix it, or this will be locked.
 
Locking this thread under Rule 3 of the Forum Guidelines. Please lurk more and check out the RMT Archive to see the kind of detail is required. Feel free to PM me with changes and I will gladly unlock your thread.
 
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