Bummer
Jamming to the beat
As much of a pun that is, I believe it's for the best to cut out Withdraw entirely. Getting addicted to herbs and vitamins, while at the same time becoming hostile and overconfident against the trainer, sounds like a better angle.alright so fleshing this idea out a little more
http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Vitamin
http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Herbal_medicine
I like the idea of a trainer feeding a pokemon ridiculous amounts of medicine or vitamins then having the pokemon suffer withdrawal symptoms (using withdraw I guess). This is especially interesting because you can find some of this stuff just lying on the ground.
Would you snort energy powder that you just found lying around on the ground?!
This could also explain the whole happiness being lowered effect and stuff.
Also the final panel should probably be squirtle (or whatever other pokemon) hiding within it's shell, with bloodshot, baggy eyes, looking super scared or upset or whatever.
Edit: Oh right forgot I had an image to post:
My fire starter, based on the tiger (because electabuzz and raikou aren't enough). Making it look pokemon-esque is probably my biggest issue with these species. Or making them connected to fire and electricity overall besides the color palette and fur pattern. Also I now hate drawing cats.