This was a great warstory to read, and I especially loved the funny commentary (like other people have mentioned). It's nice to see that you also showed a lot of strategy throughout the battle, showing you weren't just battling with little thought about your moves. My only nitpick is that you seemed to be a bit TOO funny at times, which made the comments a bit weird (especially the "mustache" part...-.-). However, this is a high-class warstory, and I'm looking forward from more warstories from you! 9.5/10