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Nice warstory! I enjoyed the intro and the ending was neat. For some reason, your sprites/images aren't showing up on my screen. Also, you could make the line spacing more readable. Overall a well-played match, nice job!
I found this warstory to be too "straightforward" for my tastes, but then again mine usually involve overpredicting myself so maybe you did do a good job... xD