Team (OU) Shoddy

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Hi,everyone. Im new here and i come from Germany, because this i cant good English, but my Team isnt good t the Moment, i have Problems with Celebi,Blissey, and more. Please rate and comment my Team.

Swampert@Levtovers(adamant)
Eeartquake (80-KP/252-ATK/126-DEF/52-SP.DEF)
Ice Punch
WaterFall
Stealth Rock


Heatran@Levtovers(timid) (6-HP/252-SP.ATK/252-SPD)
Lava Plume
Earth Power
Hidden Power(grass)
Substitute

Metagross@ChoiceBand (252-ATK/207-SPD/126-spDEF)

Meteor Mash
Explosion
Earthquake
Ice Punch


Rotom-h@Choicescarf (6-HP/252-SP.ATK/252-SPD)

Trick
Overheat
Thunderbolt
Will-o-wisp


Latias@Levtovers (28-HP/140-DEF/252-SPD/90-spATK)

Calm Mind
Dragon Pulse
Recover
Thunderbolt

Suicune@Levtovers (172-HP/216-SPD/122-spATK)

Surf
Ice Beam
Hidden Power(electric)
Calm Mind

Please rate and comment my Team, what i can change?
 
Read the rules, especially rule 3:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
 

Jibaku

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Thread is closed due to rule #3 violation. Please remember to have descriptions the next time you post an RMT, otherwise it will be worse than just having your thread locked. Thanks
 
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